"PRAYERS TO GOD ON A CLEAR MORNING "

Critique evaluation:
... I think you will
have a captive
audience.
This is certainly a
captive prayer to
begin with because the
reader had no idea as
to the thoughts of the
narrator.
... this is certainly
something that will
compel your reader to
want to learn more.
I think this is a
strikingly honest
collection of prayers
that will certainly
attract the attention
of readers. Your
honesty and your
passion are clear to
anyone who read this.

"No corpse rising from his gruesome coffin
breathing the stealthy air of death.
Lord!Please be serious!
No miracles!
Only our due.
Only you.
Only your attention.
Only your love.
Amen."

J. Dabbah, from "Prayers to God
on a clear morning"

"A Martian friend of mine never recognize me. When he comes to my house he says to my dog: You earth people look all alike."

"Martians are tall or short depending on their shadow at a given moment. At noon they are as they should be."

J. Dabbah, from "It's an ill wind that blows no Martian"